Hi, Ally!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Son!
Thank you for always doing your homework. ^^
Wow! That\'s around the same age of marriage in the Philippines back then too.
These days, the ideal age of marriage here is 26-28 years old.
People also say that nowadays, people should get married at an earlier age because of the diet and environment we now have.
They say that it would be more difficult to bear children at an older age.
~~t. Ally
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In the old days, young people in our country got married early, probably around the age of 12.
>> CORRECT!
But then the average life expectancy was very short, probably before and after 40.
>> CORRECT!
But now, the average life expectancy of our country has doubled, so the age of marriage has been extended.
>> But now, the average life expectancy in our country has doubled, so the age of marriage has been extended.
Young people get a job after school, and I think that before and after 30 years old is appropriate.
>> Young people get a job after school, and I think, before and after 30 years old is appropriate.
Indeed, statistics have shown that the average age of a married young man is 32 years old.
>> Indeed, statistics have shown that the average age of a married man is 32 years old.
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