Hi, Ally!

2019-06-10 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: Answer this essay in 5-7 senses: As a child, when you got sick, what was the most memorable and effective that your mom or did would do to help you feel better? I don’t remember the past very well. I don’t remember being sick, and I’ve never been in a hospital as I grew up. I know I’ve heard warm words from my parents, but I don’t remember them. Perhaps, I was very healthy growing up. I remember the only summer flu I had in my second year of high school, and I remember having a month\'s rest at home. As people get older, they seem to fade their old memories first.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Son!

I admire how much you take care of your health even at a young age. ^^

I wish all individuals could be like that.

But a month\'s rest is quite a long time!

I hope you were able to catch up to your studies even with that long break.

~~t. Ally

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I don’t remember the past very well.
>> CORRECT!

I don’t remember being sick, and I’ve never been in a hospital as I grew up.
>> CORRECT!

I know I’ve heard warm words from my parents, but I don’t remember them.
>> CORRECT!

Perhaps, I was very healthy growing up.
>> CORRECT!

I remember the only summer flu I had in my second year of high school, and I remember having a month\'s rest at home.
>> CORRECT!

As people get older, they seem to fade their old memories first.

>> As people get older, their old memories seem to fade first.

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