Hi, Ally!

2019-06-11 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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HOMEWORK: Answer this essay in 5 senses: Tell me about an eating habit that you want to change.Why? I think anyone has a good eating habit since they were young. I eat food quickly, so I want to change my eating habits so that I can eat slowly while enjoying food, and I try hard, but it does not work. So I eat alcohol as well, I eat alcohol quickly, I drink as much as I do, and I always regret the next day. So I think parents should teach their children well about their eating habits since childhood.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Son!


You never cease to impress me with your compositions! ^^

This is a good one.

Parents and individuals themselves need to be aware of the things they eat and drink.

See you in class. ^^


~~t. Ally



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I think anyone has a good eating habit since they were young.

>> I think anyone had a good eating habit when they were young.


 I eat food quickly, so I want to change my eating habits so that I can eat slowly while enjoying food, and I try hard, but it does not work.

>> I eat food quickly, so I want to change my eating habits so that I can slowly eat while enjoying the food. And I try hard, but it doesn\'t work.


 So I eat alcohol as well, I eat alcohol quickly, I drink as much as I do, and I always regret the next day.

>> So I drink alcohol as well, and quickly too. I drink as much as I can, and I always regret it the next day.


 So I think parents should teach their children well about their eating habits since childhood.

>> So I think parents should teach their children well about their eating habits starting from their childhood.

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