Hi, Ally!

2019-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: Answer this essay in 5-8 senses: What do you think is the last problem that the world is facing now?Explain why choice this specific problem. I think it is North Korea\'s nuclear issue. I think North Korean leader Kim Jong Un is a very wise and intelligent man. I think he is using our country and the U.S. president in a clever way. North Korea\'s nuclear weapons are very scary because they are controlled by irrational people. He also conducts nuclear tests and missile launches with North Koreans as hostages. In short, North Korean leadership is a gangster group that is difficult to handle.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Son!

Wow!

This is quite shocking.

And very dangerous as well.

I also agree about Kim Jong Un being clever.

He knows how to manipulate people, which is quite scary.

I hope his reign ends soon.

I think North Korea deserves freedom from his ruling.

Thank you for sharing this issue with me. ^^

~t. Ally

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I think it is North Korea\'s nuclear issue.

>> CORRECT!

I think North Korean leader Kim Jong Un is a very wise and intelligent man.

>> CORRECT!

I think he is using our country and the U.S. president in a clever way.

>> CORRECT!

North Korea\'s nuclear weapons are very scary because they are controlled by irrational people.

>> CORRECT!

He also conducts nuclear tests and missile launches with North Koreans as hostages.

>> CORRECT!

In short, North Korean leadership is a gangster group that is difficult to handle.

>> CORRECT!

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