Hi, Ally!
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
Answer this essay using not more than 5 senses:
When you are in a stressful situation, how do you keep yourself calm?
We often get stressed from our surroundings.
So wisely relieving stress is protecting our health.
When I am stressed, I have a habit of going to the mountains, and when I sweat, the stress is forgotten and I recover again.
So when I get stressed, I sweat through severe physical exercise, then drink and sleep, the stress is released.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Son!
I think you have a great way of releasing stress!
Exercising a really good way of catharsis. (a positive way of letting out stress)
Keep that up!^^
~~t. Ally
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We often get stressed from our surroundings.
>> CORRECT!
So wisely relieving stress is protecting our health.
>> CORRECT!
When I am stressed, I have a habit of going to the mountains, and when I sweat, the stress is forgotten and I recover again.
>> CORRECT!
So when I get stressed, I sweat through severe physical exercise, then drink and sleep, the stress is released.
>> CORRECT!
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