Hi, Ally!
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
Use \"On cloud Nine\" in a sentence.Try to date it to your town life experience.
I don’t think I remember much fun in my life.
Firstly, I guess I was on cloud Nine when I was promoted to executive post.
Secondly, I was also on cloud Nine when I first met a friend who had moved to New York in the United States.
And lastly, when my family and friends\' family traveled together in the eastern United States, I was also on cloud Nine .
강사 첨삭
Hi, Son!
Thank you for sharing this with me. :)
These are wonderful memories!
It made me smile while reading them.
~~t. Ally
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I don’t think I remember much fun in my life.
>> CORRECT!
Firstly, I guess I was on cloud Nine when I was promoted to executive post.
>> Firstly, I guess I was on cloud nine when I was promoted to the executive post.
Secondly, I was also on cloud nine when I first met a friend who had moved to New York in the United States.
>> CORRECT!
And lastly, when my family and friends\' family traveled together in the eastern United States, I was also on cloud nine .
>> CORRECT!
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