Hi, Ally!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi sir Son!
This is a very nice composition. ^^
And I agree that jokes should always be thought of carefully.
Keep up the good work!
~~t. Ally
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I think that jokes should make the other person feel good.
>> CORRECT!
But jokes that offend the other person are usually about the other person\'s family or
if you use the other\'s physical weakness and the other\'s weakness.
>> But jokes that offend the other person are usually about the other person\'s family or
if you use the other\'s physical weaknesses and other weaknesses.
So I think jokes should always be done after careful thinking.
>> CORRECT!
A joke that you spit out without thinking can be fatal.
>> CORRECT!
The jokes between close friends are a little unpleasant, but they can be forgotten and understood after a few days.
>> CORRECT!
But I think that if you’re not very friendly, you should be careful about the jokes.
>> But I think that if you’re not very close, you should be careful about the jokes.
In speeches and lectures to the public, I think simple jokes are essential to ice breaking.
>> In speeches and lectures to the public, I think simple jokes are essential to breaking the ice.
I always think light jokes have an effect on the atmosphere, we say that these people are humorous.
>> CORRECT!
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