Hi, Ally!

2019-07-01 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: Answer this question in not more than 10 senses: What types of jokes annoy or offend you? Why? I think that jokes should make the other person feel good. But jokes that offend the other person are usually about the other person\'s family or If you use the other\'s physical weakness and the other\'s weakness. So I think jokes should always be done after careful thinking. A joke that you spit out without thinking can be fatal. The jokes between close friends are a little unpleasant, but they can be forgotten and understood after a few days. But I think that if you’re not very friendly, you should be careful about the jokes. In speeches and lectures to the public, I think simple jokes are essential to ice breaking. I always think light jokes have an effect on the atmosphere, we say that these people are humorous.

강사 첨삭

Hi sir Son!


This is a very nice composition. ^^

And I agree that jokes should always be thought of carefully.

Keep up the good work!



~~t. Ally




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I think that jokes should make the other person feel good.
>> CORRECT!

But jokes that offend the other person are usually about the other person\'s family or
 if you use the other\'s physical weakness and the other\'s weakness.
>> But jokes that offend the other person are usually about the other person\'s family or
 if you use the other\'s physical weaknesses and other weaknesses.


 So I think jokes should always be done after careful thinking.
>> CORRECT!


 A joke that you spit out without thinking can be fatal.
>> CORRECT!


 The jokes between close friends are a little unpleasant, but they can be forgotten and understood after a few days.
>> CORRECT!


 But I think that if you’re not very friendly, you should be careful about the jokes.
>>  But I think that if you’re not very close, you should be careful about the jokes.


 In speeches and lectures to the public, I think simple jokes are essential to ice breaking.
>> In speeches and lectures to the public, I think simple jokes are essential to breaking the ice.


 I always think light jokes have an effect on the atmosphere, we say that these people are humorous.

>> CORRECT!

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