Hi, Ally!
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
What do you wish to accomplish for the month of July?
I just hope that July will pass safely and comfortably without incident.
I hope everyone around me is healthy and cool in the hot summer.
I am going to trek to Laos for a week at the end of July, so I want to go and come back safely.
강사 첨삭
Hi, sir Son!
Wow, that\'s exciting! ^^
I do hope you enjoy.
Thank you for sharing this with me!
~~t. Ally
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I just hope that July will pass safely and comfortably without incident.
>> I just hope that July will pass safely and comfortably without any incidents.
I hope everyone around me is healthy and cool in the hot summer.
>> CORRECT!
I am going to trek to Laos for a week at the end of July, so I want to go and come back safely.
>> I am going to trek in Laos for a week at the end of July, so I want to go and come back safely.
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