Hi, Ally!

2019-07-08 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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HOMEWORK: Which country do you think has the biggest influence to Korea? Why do you think so? Historically, everyone thinks that China has had the greatest impact on Korea. This is because our character system and thought system are influenced by Chinese characters, Confucian thought and Buddhism, and all diets are similar. And I think that the United States and Japan have had a lot of influence in the recent 100 years. This is because most of our recent thinking and scholarship came through Japan and the US.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Son!

This is a very wonderful and factual composition. ^^

Thank you for sharing!

Keep it up!

~t. Ally

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Historically, everyone thinks that China has had the greatest impact on Korea.
>> CORRECT!

This is because our character system and thought system are influenced by Chinese characters, Confucian thought and Buddhism, and all diets are similar.
>> CORRECT!

And I think that the United States and Japan have had a lot of influence in the recent 100 years.
>> CORRECT!

This is because most of our recent thinking and scholarship came through Japan and the US.

>> This is because most of our recent thinking and scholarship came from Japan and the US.

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