Hi, Ally!

2019-07-09 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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HOMEWORK: What are the factors that make a long-lasting friendship? Give at least 3 and explain why. Firstly, I think that we should always be honest for friendship to make a long-lasting friendship, Secondly, you should never ridicule your friend\'s weaknesses, because you always have to consider your friend\'s mind. We always have to think that effort between each other is necessary, why is that we do not last long friendship with a friend in an spontaneous mood.

강사 첨삭

Hi there. sir Son. ^^

These factors are wonderful.

If all people tried to do such actions, I think the world would be a very prosperous place!

Thank you for sharing these. ^^

~t. Ally

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Firstly, I think that we should always be honest for friendship to make a long-lasting friendship,

>> Firstly, I think that we should always be honest, to make a long-lasting friendship.

Secondly, you should never ridicule your friend\'s weaknesses, because you always have to consider your friend\'s mind.
>> Secondly, you should never ridicule your friend\'s weaknesses, because you always have to consider your friend\'s thoughts.

We always have to think that effort between each other is necessary, why is that we do not last long friendship with a friend in an spontaneous mood.

>> We always have to think that efforts between each other is necessary, which is why we do not have a long lasting friendship with a person spontaneously.

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