Hi, Ally!

2019-07-09 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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HOMEWORK: Why do you think is racism a very big issue noways? How can racism end? I think that historically, racism started with the Jews, I think racism comes from and continues with human narrow thoughts, and I think that it will never be solved. I think racism will not be solved by religious mercy and education, but will be eased little by little through a lot of trial and error.

강사 첨삭

Hi, sir Son. ^^


That\'s true.

It has been an issue since the beginning of time.

Unfortunately, some people don\'t understand what respecting others mean. :(

But I hope someday it gets better.


~t. Ally




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I think that historically, racism started with the Jews,

>> I think that historically, racism started with the Jews.


 I think racism comes from and continues with human narrow thoughts,
and I think that it will never be solved.
>> I think racism comes from and continues to progress because of humanity\'s narrow-mindedness, and I think that it would never be solved.


 I think racism will not be solved by religious mercy and education, but will be eased little by little through a lot of trial and error.

>> CORRECT!

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