Hi, Ally!

2019-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: If you were the first person to walk on the moon, what would your first words be? What would you do there? Because the moon has no water and air and no plants grow, the moon we know will be very desolate, so I will say it is too desolate . I will look at the earth first, \"What will the earth look like in the moon?\" Then I will look at what the moon\'s surface and atmosphere are made up of, and how my body reacts on the moon.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Son! ^^

That is awesome!

It\'ll be a little lonely, but it\'s also amazing to be the person who gets to go to the moon.

~t. Ally

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Because the moon has no water and air and no plants grow, the moon we know will be very desolate, so I will say it is too desolate .
>> Because the moon has no water, no air and no plants grow, the moon we know will be very desolate, so I will say it is too desolate.

I will look at the earth first, \"What will the earth look like in the moon?\"
>> I will look at the earth first and say, \"What will the earth look like in the moon?\"

Then I will look at what the moon\'s surface and atmosphere are made up of, and how my body reacts on the moon.

>> CORRECT!

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