Hi, Ally!

2019-07-18 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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HOMEWORK: Name an item that you have recently bought which costs an arm and a leg?Do you think you spent your money wisely when you bought that item?Why or why not? I usually do not buy things. But some time ago I bought an expensive bluetooth to improve my English listening ability. It was a little expensive, but I use it well without regret. But sometimes I spend a lot of money when I drink, so I regret the next day.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Son! ^^

Yes, Bluetooth earphones are very handy! ^^

Nice purchase.

But be careful in spending money on alcohol, alright?

Stay healthy! ^^

~t. Ally

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I usually do not buy things.

>> CORRECT!

But some time ago I bought an expensive bluetooth to improve my English listening ability.
>> But some time ago, I bought an expensive Bluetooth earphone to improve my English listening ability.

It was a little expensive, but I use it well without regret.
>> CORRECT!

But sometimes I spend a lot of money when I drink, so I regret the next day.

>> But sometimes, I spend a lot money when I drink alcohol, which I immediately regret the next day.

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