Hi\' Ally!

2019-07-23 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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HOMEWORK: Do you consider yourself a patient person? Why or why not? Tell me a situation that tested your patience I do not think I am a patient person. I always try to wait impatiently for the result of something. I hear a lot of nagging from my wife because of my impatience. Patience is gained through a lot of mental training and experience, and I think that it should be based on nature. I think that being patience is an important virtue in life.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Son!

Thank you for sending in a composition before you went on your trip. ^^

I think you are quite patient.

And it truly is a an important virtue.

~t. Ally

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I do not think I am a patient person.
>> CORRECT!

I always try to wait impatiently for the result of something.
>> CORRECT!

I hear a lot of nagging from my wife because of my impatience.
>> CORRECT!

Patience is gained through a lot of mental training and experience, and I think that it should be based on nature.
>> CORRECT!

I think that being patience is an important virtue in life.

>> I think that being patient is an important virtue in life.

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