Hi, Ally!

2019-08-08 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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HOMEWORK: What do you think about investing money on the stock market? Have you tried it before? Will you recommend this method of investment to other people? I don\'t have an account in a securities company. I did not invest in securities that most Koreans are doing. But I am often told about securities investment. In general, I\' ve heard that small investors often fail, and institutional investors succeed. In conclusion, I think that the people around me are more people who have failed through securities.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Son!


I think it was a good move on your part not to invest in the stock market.

You saved yourself from a very risky way of investing.

Nowadays, money is very hard to come by.

So we have to be very wise in spending our money. ^^



~t. Ally



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I don\'t have an account in a securities company.

>> I don\'t have any investments in stocks.


 I did not invest in securities that most Koreans are doing.

>> I did not invest in stocks, despite the big number of Koreans who do so.


 But I am often told about securities investment.

>> But I am often told about stock investments.


 In general, I\' ve heard that small investors often fail, and institutional investors succeed.

>> In general, I\'ve heard that small investors often failed, and institutional investors succeeded.


 In conclusion, I think that the people around me are more people who have failed through securities.

>> In conclusion, I think that there are more people around me who have failed than succeeded in this kind of investment method.

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