Hi, Ally!

2019-08-16 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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HOMEWORK: Imagine that it started raining in Korea for 3 weeks straight. What do you think will happen to your country? In Korea, there will be no rain for three weeks, but if there is not a lot of rain at once, there are many mountains and drainage is good. Korea is not hot except for summer, so it is not humid even if it rains. If it rains constantly for three weeks in the summer, firstly, farming will be a mess, Korea will be seriously damaged because it harvests only once a year. Secondly, there is the vacation season, so if people go abroad for vacations, the domestic economy will also be seriously reduced. Finally, people will be stressed because they are hot and humid.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Son!

Thank you for such an informative composition. ^^

I hope you have a wonderful weekend!

~t. Ally

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In Korea, there will be no rain for three weeks, but if there is not a lot of rain at once, there are many mountains and drainage is good.

>> In Korea, it is unlikely to rain for three weeks. Despite this, there are many mountains and drainages that do us good.

Korea is not hot except for summer, so it is not humid even if it rains.

>> CORRECT!

If it rains constantly for three weeks in the summer, firstly, farming will be a mess, Korea will be seriously damaged because it harvests only once a year.

>> CORRECT!

Secondly, there is the vacation season, so if people go abroad for vacations, the domestic economy will also be seriously reduced.

>> CORRECT!

Finally, people will be stressed because they are hot and humid.

>> Finally, people will be stressed because they are feeling hot and humid.

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