Hi! Ally,

2019-08-19 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Do you think police are well paid in your country? I don\'t think the police in our country get a lot of pay. I think they serve the people with a sense of mission and a spirit of service, In addition, police officers in Korea are not very bad in compensation, but after retirement they benefit from public official pension. In our country, the people are not afraid of the police, and the public power is quite ignored. So the police are very tired professionally, I hope that everyone will respect the police.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Son. ^^

The police are very respectable people.

They take care of a lot of crimes and they keep us safe. ^^

I sure hope so too!

~t. Ally

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I don\'t think the police in our country get a lot of pay.

>> CORRECT!

I think they serve the people with a sense of mission and a spirit of service.

>> CORRECT!

In addition, police officers in Korea are not very bad in compensation, but after retirement they benefit from public official pension.

>> In addition, police officers in Korea are not badly compensated, but after retirement they benefit from public official pension.

In our country, the people are not afraid of the police, and the public power is quite ignored.

>> CORRECT!

So the police are very tired professionally, I hope that everyone will respect the police.

>> CORRECT!

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