Hi! Ally.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, sir Son. ^^
Yea, I\'ve also heard about this issue in Korea nowadays.
Thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Your compositions are always so interesting to read. ^^
~~t. Ally
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In Korea, workers usually retire at the age of 60, but the trend is extending the age of retirement.
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Perhaps, the main reason is the increase in average life expectancy and the lack of workers due to low fertility rates.
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However, unemployment for high-educated workers is serious in Korea, but there are not many workers in the 3D industry, so many foreign workers are filling in and continuing to extend their retirement age.
>> CORRECT!
In addition, the youth unemployment rate is serious because Korean young people do not want to work in 3D industries.
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In Korea, seniors are easy to find jobs, but young people will have to work, get married, and have children.
>> In Korea, it\'s easy for seniors to find jobs, but young people will have to work, get married and have children.
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