Hi! Ally.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Son!
Yes, I have also heard about that issue.
A lot of things are happening in Korea nowadays, and this is one of the most serious issues.
I think stress is a very big factor.
~t. Ally
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I think that whether the people of our country are happy or not is different from people.
>> CORRECT!
Older people will feel happy now because they have been hungry and difficult.
>> Older people will feel happy now because they have been hungry and had a difficult life.
But the younger generation does not feel happier than the old, although it has grown abundantly, due to high unemployment and individualism.
>> CORRECT!
If young people are happy, they will marry and have babies, but Korea\'s birth rate is the lowest in the world.
>> CORRECT!
There was news that Korea has a low happiness index, and happiness does not seem to be influenced by material abundance.
>> CORRECT!
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