Hi! Ally.

2019-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Are the people in your country generally very happy? Why or why not? I think that whether the people of our country are happy or not is different from people. Older people will feel happy now because they have been hungry and difficult. But the younger generation does not feel happier than the old, although it has grown abundantly, due to high unemployment and individualism. If young people are happy, they will marry and have babies, but Korea\'s birth rate is the lowest in the world. There was news that Korea has a low happiness index, and happiness does not seem to be influenced by material abundance.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Son!


Yes, I have also heard about that issue.

A lot of things are happening in Korea nowadays, and this is one of the most serious issues.

I think stress is a very big factor.


~t. Ally



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I think that whether the people of our country are happy or not is different from people.

>> CORRECT!


 Older people will feel happy now because they have been hungry and difficult.

>>  Older people will feel happy now because they have been hungry and had a difficult life.


 But the younger generation does not feel happier than the old, although it has grown abundantly, due to high unemployment and individualism.

>> CORRECT!


 If young people are happy, they will marry and have babies, but Korea\'s birth rate is the lowest in the world.

>> CORRECT!


 There was news that Korea has a low happiness index, and happiness does not seem to be influenced by material abundance.

>>  CORRECT!

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