Hi! Ally.

Hi, sir Son! ^^

This is a very heart-warming composition.

Thank you so much for sharing this with me.^^

You are welcome!

I am glad to be part of your growth. ^^

~t. Ally

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We have too much to thank every day around us.

>> Everyday, we have so much to thank around us.

 First, we should be thankful to God for day safely from early morning to evening and for eating every day.

>> First, we should be thankful to God for allowing us to be safe and well- fed daily.

 We should also thank firefighters and police officers who protect us from the fire and from danger.

>> CORRECT!

 We should be grateful for everyone who gives us food, wear, and sleep around us without knowing me.

>> We should be grateful for everyone who gives us food and clothes around us.

 If we do not know how to thank, life will be desolate and a dry life, so I think we should educate students as people who can thank them.

>>  If we do not know how to be thankful, life will be desolate and a dry, so I think we should educate students to be grateful for everything they have.

 Ally, thank you all the time for improving my English conversation skills,

>> Ally, thank you for helping me improve my English conversation skills all the time.