Hi! Ally.

2019-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Which hobbies are the most popular with women in your country? With men? I think that hobbies in any country vary depending on the class, natural conditions, and climate. Korea has many mountains and four seasons are clear, so women\'s hobbies vary depending on the season. Normal women in our country like to climb in spring and autumn and spend summers in swimming pools. However, wealthy women travel mainly overseas, spend winters in warm areas, or enjoy skiing in Korea. I think men are almost like women, sometimes men have a hobby of professional baseball and basketball.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Sir Son. ^^

Thank you for sharing these wonderful ideas.

I hope you keep up the good work in sharing your thoughts and opinions. ^^

~t. Ally

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I think that hobbies in any country vary depending on the class, natural conditions, and climate.

>> CORRECT!

Korea has many mountains and four seasons are clear, so women\'s hobbies vary depending on the season.

>> CORRECT!

Normal women in our country like to climb in spring and autumn and spend summers in swimming pools.

>> Normally, women in our country like to climb in spring and autumn and spend summers in swimming pools.

However, wealthy women travel mainly overseas, spend winters in warm areas, or enjoy skiing in Korea.

>> CORRECT!

I think men are almost like women, sometimes men have a hobby of professional baseball and basketball.

>> I think men are almost like women, sometimes men have a hobbies in playing professional baseball and basketball.

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