Hi! Ally.

2019-09-19 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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What do you think of the growing trend in downloading ready-made essays and other forms of homework from the Internet? These days, the Internet is like a universal magic bag. The Internet has almost all the information, so even young students and adults get a lot of help in solving various tasks. I think it is infringing on intellectual property rights to download and use ready-made essays completely from the Internet without permission. I recommend that young students just refer to ready-made essays and various forms of data through the Internet to improve their creativity. Nowadays, education that enhances creativity is popular, so the Internet has both good and bad sides.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Son. ^^

Nicely done.

This was perfect!

I\'m excited to read your future compositions. :)

~t. Ally

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These days, the Internet is like a universal magic bag.

>> CORRECT!

The Internet has almost all the information, so even young students and adults get a lot of help in solving various tasks.

>> CORRECT!

I think it is infringing on intellectual property rights to download and use ready-made essays completely from the Internet without permission.

>> CORRECT!

I recommend that young students just refer to ready-made essays and various forms of data through the Internet to improve their creativity.

>> CORRECT!

Nowadays, education that enhances creativity is popular, so the Internet has both good and bad sides.

>> CORRECT!

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