Hi! Ally.

2019-09-23 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

What are your thoughts about taking online classes or courses? List down at least 2 pros and cons of taking online classes? I think online lectures are very convenient because they are not restricted by place and time. Online classes are also cheap at price, which benefits many customers. But I think online classes have more disadvantages except for these few advantages. The biggest disadvantage of online classes is that they do not have eye contact, because it is much more effective when they look at each other\'s faces. Especially in English conversation classes, Leaner can not study pronunciation by looking at the lips of the other party, but online classes are now the trend of the times.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Son! ^^

Thank you for another informative composition.

This is very good!

~t. Ally

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I think online lectures are very convenient because they are not restricted by place and time.

>> CORRECT!

Online classes are also cheap at price, which benefits many customers.

>> Online classes are also cheap in price, which benefits many customers.

But I think online classes have more disadvantages except for these few advantages.

>> CORRECT!

The biggest disadvantage of online classes is that they do not have eye contact, because it is much more effective when they look at each other\'s faces.

>> CORRECT!

Especially in English conversation classes, Leaner can not study pronunciation by looking at the lips of the other party, but online classes are now the trend of the times.

>> Especially in English conversation classes, the learner cannot study pronunciation by looking at the lips of the other party. But online classes are now the trend of the times.

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