Hi! Ally.

2019-09-26 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Which habit is the most important for parents to set as an example of for their children? Why do you think so? There is a slight difference as the child grows up, but I think it is most important to show his parents\' reading steadily. These days, young people usually use cell phones and do not read books, so if children read and have knowledge, it becomes a lifetime asset to him. I have seen that students who have read many books in their childhood have abundant things such as imagination, creativity, affinity, and consideration. And those who read a lot of books can live their lives happily and abundantly due to their abundant knowledge. The habit of reading books is not easy, only when children see their parents reading books and learn.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Son! ^^


I totally agree!

I was blessed to be born in an era wherein people still like reading books.

I consider myself lucky.

I think books are more effective than simply looking through websites.


~t. Ally.




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There is a slight difference as the child grows up, but I think it is most important to show his parents\' reading steadily.

>> There is a slight difference as the child grows up, but I think it is most important for them to see their parents reading steadily.


 These days, young people usually use cell phones and do not read books, so if children read and have knowledge, it becomes a lifetime asset to him.

>> These days, young people usually use cell phones and do not read books, so if children read and have knowledge, it becomes a lifetime asset for them.


 I have seen that students who have read many books in their childhood have abundant things such as imagination, creativity, affinity, and consideration.

>> CORRECT!


 And those who read a lot of books can live their lives happily and abundantly due to their abundant knowledge.

>> CORRECT!


 The habit of reading books is not easy, only when children see their parents reading books and learn.

>> The habit of reading books is not easy, only when children see their parents reading books can they learn.


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