Hi! Ally.
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강사 첨삭
Hi sir Son!
I totally agree with you. ^^
In the Philippines, most of the time nowadays, people opt to simply give cash.
We do this because sometimes the person doesn\'t know what the receiver really wants.
So we let them pick out their own gifts.
~t. Ally
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I think there is nothing inappropriate in our country as a gift.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> I don\'t think there are any inappropriate gifts in our country.
However, in public societies, private interests are involved, so gifts are very strict.
>> CORRECT!
However, depending on the relationship, I think there are some things that are taboo as gifts.
>> CORRECT!
I think it is best that gifts are not burdensome, because if the person receiving the gift feels burdened, it is regarded as a bribe, not a gift.
>> CORRECT!
Finally, I think that gifts are best what the other person wants, and light gifts enrich our society.
>> Finally, I think that the best gifts are what the other person wants, and light gifts enrich our society.
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