Hi! Ally.

2019-09-30 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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If you heard someone you knew, what would you do? If I have heard some harmful gossip about someone I know, I will usually look back on his being. If he is a person who has lived properly, I will excuse him. But I think people can make mistakes unless they are God, so I think bad rumors of mistakes need to be excused. Everyone can make mistakes, but it is difficult to acknowledge their mistakes, so I think the courage to make mistakes and ask for forgiveness is true courage. Let us have a heart to forgive whenever an action is not deliberate.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, sir Son. ^^

That\'s true.

We are only human, and we do make mistakes.

Everyone needs a heart that forgives, and a character that changes for the better. ^^

~t. Ally

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If I have heard some harmful gossip about someone I know, I will usually look back on his being.

>> CORRECT!

If he is a person who has lived properly, I will excuse him.

>> CORRECT!

But I think people can make mistakes unless they are God, so I think bad rumors of mistakes need to be excused.

>> CORRECT!

Everyone can make mistakes, but it is difficult to acknowledge their mistakes, so I think the courage to make mistakes and ask for forgiveness is true courage.

>> CORRECT!

Let us have a heart to forgive whenever an action is not deliberate.

>> CORRECT!

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