Hi! Ally.
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These are very good answers, Mr. [Name]. ^^
Keep up the great work!
See you soon.
~t. Ally
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The benefit of owning a car is first convenience, which is convenient to move anywhere and anytime.
>> The first benefit of owning a car is the convenience, which means the person can go anywhere, at any time.
Second, personal privacy is not guaranteed when using public transportation, but personal privacy is guaranteed by owning a car.
>> CORRECT!
It also has the advantage of enjoying the fun time of family in the same space.
>> It also has the advantage of being able to enjoy some family time in the same space.
Finally, you can access any place where public transportation is not accessible.
>> Finally, you can have access to any place wherein public transportation cannot access.
Most importantly, I think you should always be careful about driving and observing traffic signals when you own a car.
>> CORRECT!
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