Hi! Ally.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Son!
Wonderfully said! ^^
Thank you for sharing your insights.
Have a wonderful weekend!
~t. Ally
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I think it\'s really hard to resolve a conflict with a close-minded person.
>> CORRECT!
I usually make concessions when conflicts arise with close-minded people, because close-minded peoples are a kind of person who does not try to understand the cause no matter how detailed I explain it.
>> I usually make concessions when conflicts arise with close-minded people, because close-minded people are those who do not try to understand the cause no matter how detailed I explain it.
When I live in the world, I feel the most frustrated when I meet this kind of person.
>> CORRECT!
A close-minded people has a mental age like childification, so they only think of themselves, so a wide minded person always understands and concede.
>> A close-minded person has a mental age like a child, so they only think of themselves, while an open-minded person always understands and concedes.
So I hate the word \"closed-minded\"most, I think, always we should live a life that understands and gives consideration each other.
>> So I hate the word \"closed-minded\" most, I think we should live a life full of understanding and consideration to each other.
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