Hi! Ally.
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강사 첨삭
Hi, Son!
I agree with your statements! ^^
I am so happy to find another person who has the same sentiments as I do about this topic.
Our country has a \"respect the elderly\" kind of culture, and it\'s so hard to voice out our opinions because when we do, it always sounds disrespectful to them.
Of course, we do have to respect them, but I believe they also have to respect what we have to say.
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts.
~t. Ally
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I don\'t think it\'s all disrespectful to argue with the elderly, because it depends on the case.
>> I don\'t think it\'s always disrespectful to argue with the elderly, because it depends on the case.
Sometimes the elderly are often wrong, because there are many elderly people who are rude to young people for no reason these days.
>> CORRECT!
Generally, the elders have a lot of wisdom because they have a lot of life experience, so we should generally respect the elders.
>> CORRECT!
And when we honor the old, our descendants will respect us.
>> CORRECT!
Korea has a beautiful custom of honoring the elderly from the old years ago, so we generally respect the elderly.
>> CORRECT!
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