Hi! Ally.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Son. ^^
Thank you for sharing this.
I think travelling the world is a really good idea.
You can make these come true! ^^
~t. Ally
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Perhaps everyone has a dream that is difficult to achieve from a young age.
>> CORRECT!
I have a dream of traveling around the world after retirement, I think it will be a little bit, but it will be difficult to complete.
>> I have a dream of traveling around the world after retirement, but it will be difficult to complete.
I think that if you have a big goal, you can achieve some even if you do not get it completely done.
>>CORRECT!
I am studying English conversation now, but I think that health and economic power should be supported to travel around the world.
>> I am studying English conversation now, but I think that my health and economic power should be well supported for me to travel around the world.
I think that if my health is allowed and I have friends to accompany, I can travel around the world, but I have not found a friend who matches my thoughts yet.
>> I think that if my health permits it and I have friends to accompany me, I can travel around the world, but I have not found a friend who matches my thoughts yet.
I think it is possible for anyone to achieve their goals when they are matched by luck, effort, and the help around them.
>> CORRECT!
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