Hi! Ally.

2019-10-22 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Do you think it is a good idea to borrow money from a friend? Why or why not? I don’t think borrowing money is good for friends or relatives. I think it is desirable to borrow money from financial institutions. If you borrow money from a friend or relative, if you can not pay back the money, your friend and relatives become enemies. In Korea, there were many problems in the past when the national income was low, borrowing money from friends and relatives. But poor people without credit and bank collateral can\'t borrow money from financial institutions, so they try to borrow money from friends or relatives. So, people borrow money from close friends or relatives, and they cause a lot of problems because they can not pay back, and our country has experienced many of these processes. I have seen a lot of these situations, and it is inevitable in a backward country with low national income.

강사 첨삭

Hi Son!

I agree with you completely!

That is true.

It\'s really difficult to mix money and friends & family.

~t. Ally

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I don’t think borrowing money is good for friends or relatives.
I think it is desirable to borrow money from financial institutions.

>> CORRECT!

If you borrow money from a friend or relative, if you can not pay back the money, your friend and relatives become enemies.

>> If you borrow money from a friend or relative, and you can\'t pay them back, your friends and relatives could become enemies.

In Korea, there were many problems in the past when the national income was low, borrowing money from friends and relatives.

>> In Korea, there have been many problems in the past when the national income was low, because of borrowing money from friends and relatives.

But poor people without credit and bank collateral can\'t borrow money from financial institutions, so they try to borrow money from friends or relatives.

>> CORRECT!

So, people borrow money from close friends or relatives, and they cause a lot of problems because they can not pay back, and our country has experienced many of these processes.

>> CORRECT!

I have seen a lot of these situations, and it is inevitable in a backward country with low national income.

>> CORRECT!

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