Hi! Ally.

2019-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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At this stage of your life, are you beginning to make plans for your retirement years? Why? I\'m retiring by the end of February next year. Korean education officials have an honorary retirement system that can retire according to their wishes before retirement under the age limit. I\'m going to choose an honorable retirement two years ahead, because I have to take care of my old father. And when I am free from my father, I will travel the world with a backpack. The reason why I study English conversation now is because it helps travel around the world and prevent dementia.

강사 첨삭

I admire you for sacrificing so many things in life for your father, sir Son. ^^


I do hope your father appreciates everything that you do for him.

Thank you for studying with me.

By the time you start travelling around the world, you will be a great English speaker! ^^


~t. Ally




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I\'m retiring by the end of February next year.

>> I will be retiring by the end of February next year.


 Korean education officials have an honorary retirement system that can retire according to their wishes before retirement under the age limit.

>>  Korean education officials have an honorary retirement system that allows them to retire according to their wishes before retirement under the age limit.


 I\'m going to choose an honorable retirement two years ahead, because I have to take care of my old father.

>> CORRECT!


 And when I am free from my father, I will travel the world with a backpack.

>> CORRECT!


 The reason why I study English conversation now is because it helps travel around the world and prevent dementia.

>> The reason why I study English conversation now is because it will help me travel around the world and it can prevent dementia.

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