Hi! Ally.

2019-10-29 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Where is the best place on earth? Why? I think there are many good places in the world. There are many places in the world where natural scenery is good like the Philippines and historically meaningful places where human civilization developed. I liked the historical site of Egypt, New York where modern civilization developed, and Southeast Asia and China where natural scenery was good. The best place in the world is so subjective that it will be different for each person. In my opinion, many people think that their home is the best place.

강사 첨삭

Wow!

The world is a wonderful place. ^^

Thank you for sharing this.

~t. Ally

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I think there are many good places in the world.

>> CORRECT!

There are many places in the world where natural scenery is good like the Philippines and historically meaningful places where human civilization developed.

>> There are many places in the world where natural scenery is good, like the Philippines. There are also historically meaningful places where human civilization was developed.

I liked the historical site of Egypt, New York where modern civilization developed, and Southeast Asia and China where natural scenery was good.

>> I liked the historical site of Egypt, I also like New York, where modern civilization was developed, and Southeast Asia and China, where natural scenery is good.

The best place in the world is so subjective that it will be different for each person.

>> CORRECT!

In my opinion, many people think that their home is the best place.

>> CORRECT!

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