Hi, Ally.

2019-10-29 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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What are some differences in your culture\'s generation gaps when compared to that of another culture\'s own generation gaps? I think Korea is probably the country where the industry has developed the most rapidly. So I think that there are a lot of differences in thoughts and actions between generations in Korea. Perhaps, if Korea has gradually developed, the culture will gradually change and it will not be able to recognize the gap between generations. When the thoughts and actions of generations change slowly, the conflicts between generations are understood and easy to heal. I think that now Korea is suffering from conflicts caused by generation differences, and this is also a process to overcome.

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Hi there. ^^

Great composition, sir Son!

Thank you.

~t. Ally

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I think Korea is probably the country where the industry has developed the most rapidly.

>> CORRECT!

So I think that there are a lot of differences in thoughts and actions between generations in Korea.

>> CORRECT!

Perhaps, if Korea has gradually developed, the culture will gradually change and it will not be able to recognize the gap between generations.

>> CORRECT!

When the thoughts and actions of generations change slowly, the conflicts between generations are understood and easy to heal.

>> When the thoughts and actions of generations change slowly, the conflicts between generations are understood and are easy to heal.

I think that now Korea is suffering from conflicts caused by generation differences, and this is also a process to overcome.

>> I think now that Korea is suffering from conflicts caused by generation differences, this is also a process to overcome.

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