Hi! Ally.

2019-11-04 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Does your government support single parents? Do you think there is a negative effect in having this type of benefit? Our country has a lot of help regardless of whether we have parents or single parents. Whether my parents go to a nursing hospital or are managed by a professional manager at my house, if I only have some economic burden, the rest will be burdened by the government. Nowadays, in our country, most couples work, so we can not manage elderly parents at home. So, the country gives me a lot of economic help, which is the benefit of the state\'s medical insurance. Korea\'s medical insurance is well done worldwide, and many countries are benchmarking.

강사 첨삭

Hi Sir Son!

I\'m glad your government has a lot of benefits for your people. ^^

This is wonderful news!

I hope it\'ll be a progressive and long-term solution to a lot of financial issues in your country.

~t. Ally

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Our country has a lot of help regardless of whether we have parents or single parents.

>> CORRECT!

Whether my parents go to a nursing hospital or are managed by a professional manager at my house, if I only have some economic burden, the rest will be burdened by the government.

>> Whether my parents go to a nursing home or are managed by a professional manager at my house, if I have some kind of economic or financial burden, the rest will be shouldered by the government.

Nowadays, in our country, most couples work, so we can not manage elderly parents at home.

>> CORRECT!

So, the country gives me a lot of economic help, which is the benefit of the state\'s medical insurance.

>> CORRECT!

Korea\'s medical insurance is well done worldwide, and many countries are benchmarking.

>> CORRECT!

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