Hi! Ally.
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강사 첨삭
Hi there, Son. ^^
This is a very positive composition. ^^
Thank you so much for sharing!
~t. Ally
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I want to use this expression when my friend is disappointed because he has failed in business, \"Lick your own wounds\".
>> CORRECT!
Anyone can have success and failure, and it is very difficult to overcome failure wisely when they fail.
>> CORRECT!
When we fail, we need encouragement around us, and we encourage our failed friends in various ways, for example, we can help them economically, spend time together, or encourage them as words.
>> When we fail, we need encouragement around us, and we encourage our failed friends in various ways, for example, we can help them economically, spend time together, or encourage them with words.
It is easy for a person to fail, but it is very cool to overcome it and succeed again.
>> CORRECT!
Let\'s encourage this words when our friends around us fail, \"Lick your own wounds\".
>> Let\'s use the words \"Lick your own wounds\" to encourage our friends who have failed,
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