Hi! Ally.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Son!
Thank you for sharing opinion regarding this composition. ^^
I\'m amazed that you have a lot of interest about history.
Keep it up!
~t. Ally
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If I have more free time, I want to read a lot of historical books.
>> CORRECT!
I majored in chemistry at college, but as I get older, I become more interested in history and read a lot of history-related books.
>> I majored in chemistry when I was in college, but as I got older, I became more interested in history and I read a lot of history-related books.
I am interested in the history of our country, but I am interested in how the civilization of the world has developed and how religion has been born and developed.
>> I am interested in the history of our country, but I am interested in how the civilization of the world and how religion has been born and has been developed.
I read historical books and learned the origin of the name of the Philippines, the Spanish and USA domination of the Philippines, the death of Magellan, and so on.
>> I read historical books and learned the history of the Philippines, how the Spanish and the Americans invaded the Philippines, the death of Magellan, and so on.
I think it\'s really fun to study history.
>> CORRECT!
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