Hi! Ally.

2019-11-12 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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What makes your skin crawl? Why? There are many things that make our skin crawl, for example, when we have dermatitis, allergies, or eat skin-sensitive foods, we feel that our skin is crawling. I usually feel my skin crawling when I am suddenly surprised or when the problem I expected becomes reality. We can suffer from dermatitis when we live in everyday life, and suddenly we are so surprised that our skin often suffers from crawling.] I sometimes feel my skin crrawling because of allergies when I eat foods that I do not eat often.

강사 첨삭

Hi sir Son!

Nice job on this composition. ^^

~t. Ally

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There are many things that make our skin crawl, for example, when we have dermatitis, allergies, or eat skin-sensitive foods, we feel that our skin is crawling.

>> CORRECT!

I usually feel my skin crawling when I am suddenly surprised or when the problem I expected becomes reality.

>> I usually feel my skin crawling when I am suddenly surprised or when the problem I expected becomes a reality.

We can suffer from dermatitis when we live in everyday life, and suddenly we are so surprised that our skin often suffers from crawling.

>> We may suffer from dermatitis when we live our everyday life, and suddenly we are so surprised that our skin often suffers from crawling.

I sometimes feel my skin crawling because of allergies when I eat foods that I do not eat often.

>> CORRECT!

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