Hi, Ally.

2019-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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If you won a million dollars and your best friend was asking to borrow 500,000 dollars from you, would you lend it? Why or why not? If I get a million dollars, if my friend really wants to borrow my half a million dollars, I will lend it to him at any time. Even if I made money hard, my friend would try to borrow money because he was very desperate. I think that if you help anyone when they are in trouble, someday they will help you when you are in trouble. In the world, someone who does not help when someone is in trouble, wants help when he is in trouble. God says, \"I help people who help others.\", I think we should be helpers when others need us.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for sharing this, sir Son. ^^

This is wonderful.

Good karma awaits you. ^^

~t. Ally

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If I get a million dollars, if my friend really wants to borrow my half a million dollars, I will lend it to him at any time.

>> If I win a million dollars and my friend really wants to borrow my half a million dollars, I will lend it to him at any time.

Even if I made money hard, my friend would try to borrow money because he was very desperate.

>> CORRECT!

I think that if you help anyone when they are in trouble, someday they will help you when you are in trouble.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I think that if you help anyone when they are in trouble, someday they will help you in return.

In the world, someone who does not help when someone is in trouble, wants help when he is in trouble.

>> In this world, someone who does not help when someone is in trouble won\'t receive help when they need it.

God says, \"I help people who help others.\", I think we should be helpers when others need us.

>> God says, \"I help people who help others.\", I think we should be helpful when others need us.

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