Hi! Ally.

2019-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Do you believe there is discrimination within the adoption organizations? I think there is discrimination in adoption organizations in general. Officially, there is no discrimination everywhere, but I think there must be discrimination in every work in which humans are involved. Human beings are not gods, so I think that there is no complete equality because everyone has subjectivity, but humans just try to make it equal. Our teachers should not favor special students, but as human beings, mistakes are essential, but they are only trying. I think that adoption organizations hould never discriminate for adopted children and should try not to discriminate.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Son. ^^

Thank you for sharing this with me.

I agree with your statements.

~t. Ally

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I think there is discrimination in adoption organizations in general.

>> CORRECT!

Officially, there is no discrimination everywhere, but I think there must be discrimination in every work in which humans are involved.

>> CORRECT!

Human beings are not gods, so I think that there is no complete equality because everyone has subjectivity, but humans just try to make it equal.

>> CORRECT!

Our teachers should not favor special students, but as human beings, mistakes are essential, but they are only trying.

>> CORRECT!

I think that adoption organizations should never discriminate for adopted children and should try not to discriminate.

>> I think that adoption organizations should never discriminate adopted children.

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