Hi! Ally.

2019-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Why do you think voting is important? Anyone, including me, would think voting is important. In a democratic society, every important decision is decided by voting. If the decision is made through the vote, the responsibility is for all the voters. So we should vote with great caution when we vote. In particular, I think that when we are selecting a president or a member of parliament representing the people, I should actively consider the personality and professionalism.

강사 첨삭

Hi, sir Son. ^^

Thank you for answering this question very well.

Voting is a must for every individual in every country.

~t. Ally

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Anyone, including me, would think voting is important.

>> Anyone, including myself, would think that voting is important.

In a democratic society, every important decision is decided by voting.

>> CORRECT!

If the decision is made through the vote, the responsibility is for all the voters.

>> CORRECT!

So we should vote with great caution when we vote.

>> So we should vote with great caution.

In particular, I think that when we are selecting a president or a member of parliament representing the people, I should actively consider the personality and professionalism.

>> CORRECT!

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