Hi!, Ally.

2019-11-21 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Would you ever lie to help a friend? Why or why not? I can do more than lie if I\'m doing it for a friend. If it is right thing for a friend, I can lie, but I think that if it is bad, I should never lie. In our lives, we sometimes need to lie, we call this a good lie. But lies should never be routine, lies lead to ruins. We do some lies when we say hello in our daily lives, which can be better than being too honest.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Son. ^^

Thank you for sharing.

Please continue being informative and positive in your compositions. ^^

You are a very good friend.

~ Ally

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I can do more than lie if I\'m doing it for a friend.

>> CORRECT!

If it is right thing for a friend, I can lie, but I think that if it is bad, I should never lie.

>> If it is the right thing to do for a friend, I can lie, but I think that if it is bad, I should never lie.

In our lives, we sometimes need to lie, we call this a good lie.

>> CORRECT!

But lies should never be routine, lies lead to ruins.
>> But lies should never be done routinely,because lies lead to ruins.

We do some lies when we say hello in our daily lives, which can be better than being too honest.

>> We sometime have to make white lies in our daily lives, which can be better than being too honest.

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