Hi! Ally.

2019-11-25 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

Does your mother or father have any bad habits? Tell me at least 2 for each parent. When I was a kid, I thought that my parents were always right and as capable as God. But as I got older, I found that parents were also human beings who made mistakes. I think my father didn’t give us too much affection when we grew up. So now my father and we are not very affectionate. My mother was so obsessed with her children that we had a job she wanted rather than what her children wanted to do, although not everyone was done.

강사 첨삭

Hi Son. ^^

Thank you for another great composition.

It is quite sad, but as I have observed, most people from their generation are like this.

They are very traditional and they like to control their children\'s futures.

~t. Ally

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When I was a kid, I thought that my parents were always right and as capable as God.

>> CORRECT!

But as I got older, I found that parents were also human beings who made mistakes.

>> CORRECT!

I think my father didn’t give us too much affection when we grew up.

>> I think my father didn’t give us too much affection while we were growing up.

So now my father and we are not very affectionate.

>> CORRECT!

My mother was so obsessed with her children that we had a job she wanted rather than what her children wanted to do, although not everyone was done.

>> My mother was so obsessed with us, her children, that we were made to take a job she wanted us to get rather than what we really wanted. Although, not all of us had done her bidding.

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