Hi! Ally.

2019-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Do you think that a male police officer is required to do different or more difficult or dangerous jobs than a female police officer? I agree that male police officers have to do more physical things and other things that fit their aptitudes than female police officers. I think female police officers have things that fit their aptitudes. But I think that exceptionally, women can do physically difficult and hard work like men. I think the police should be placed in a position to do what fits their aptitude and body structure if possible. I think God created humans to do what fits their body structure.

강사 첨삭

I agree with your statements sir Son.

Well done. ^^

~t. Ally

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I agree that male police officers have to do more physical things and other things that fit their aptitudes than female police officers.

>> CORRECT!

I think female police officers have things that fit their aptitudes.

>> CORRECT!

But I think that exceptionally, women can do physically difficult and hard work like men.

>> But I think that exceptionally, women can also do physically difficult tasks like men can.

I think the police should be placed in a position to do what fits their aptitude and body structure if possible.

>> CORRECT!

I think God created humans to do what fits their body structure.

>> CORRECT!

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