Hi, Ally.

2019-11-29 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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How can countries prevent plagiarism in terms of music and other social media content? Nowadays, it is easy to plagiarize and to identify plagiarism due to the Internet. It is difficult to create anything completely, so we quote a lot from existing creations. If we quote, we should find out the source of the cited paper, and if the creation is related to the patent, we should pay the patent fee. So I think plagiarism is a very bad thing. I think intellectual property rights should be kept more thoroughly. Future society will have more plagiarism.The laws on plagiarism, music or any content, will be strengthened and detailed, and intellectual property rights will be protected.

강사 첨삭

Have a happy weekend, sir Son. ^^
You did a wonderful job in this composition.
Keep it up!

~t. Ally


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Nowadays, it is easy to plagiarize and to identify plagiarism due to the Internet.
>> CORRECT!

It is difficult to create anything completely, so we quote a lot from existing creations.
>> CORRECT!

If we quote, we should find out the source of the cited paper, and if the creation is related to the patent, we should pay the patent fee.
>> If we quote something, we should find out the source of the cited paper, and if the creation is related to the patent, we should pay the patent fee.

So I think plagiarism is a very bad thing. 
>>CORRECT!

I think intellectual property rights should be kept more thoroughly.
>> CORRECT!

Future society will have more plagiarism.
>> The future society will commit more plagiarism.
 
The laws on plagiarism, music or any content, will be strengthened and detailed, and intellectual property rights will be protected.
>> CORRECT!

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