Hi! Ally.

2019-12-02 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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What are the things you are thankful for this year? People always look back on last year at the end of the year, especially I am planning to retire after this semester. So I think about a lot of people I should be grateful for in my past career. I want to thank myself first, and I am grateful for letting me retire safely without being tempted. This year, I am particularly grateful to my colleagues for doing my job policy well. Thanks to my colleagues and my family, I am grateful to have finished my last job well.

강사 첨삭

Hi!

Wonderful!^^

I am glad you are grateful for a lot of things.

I hope you have a wonderful life. ^^

Happy retirement, sir Son!

~t. Ally

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People always look back on last year at the end of the year, especially I am planning to retire after this semester.

>> I always look back on their last year by the end of their current year, especially when I am planning to retire after this semester.

So I think about a lot of people I should be grateful for in my past career.

>> CORRECT!

I want to thank myself first, and I am grateful for letting me retire safely without being tempted.

>> CORRECT!

This year, I am particularly grateful to my colleagues for doing my job policy well.

>> CORRECT!

Thanks to my colleagues and my family, I am grateful to have finished my last job well.

>> CORRECT!

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