Hi! Ally.
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Why are most Koreans opting not to have kids these days? Give me 2 pros and 2 cons about this situation.
It is a serious problem for Korean young people not to have babies.
I think that is why it is Korean high prices and it costs considerable prices to raise children.
Currently, serious problems are emerging as children are decreasing, and the number of classes is decreasing every year at school.
In the future, young people will have to pay a lot of taxes to support the elderly.
But on the other hand, if the population declines, the next generation will live in a better environment.
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Hi there, Son. ^^
I think that is why it is Korean high prices and it costs considerable prices to raise children.
Currently, serious problems are emerging as children are decreasing, and the number of classes is decreasing every year at school.
In the future, young people will have to pay a lot of taxes to support the elderly.
But on the other hand, if the population declines, the next generation will live in a better environment.
Thank you so much for sending a composition.
See you in our next class!
~t. Ally
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It is a serious problem for Korean young people not to have babies.
>> CORRECT!
I think that is why it is Korean high prices and it costs considerable prices to raise children.
>> I think the reason why is because of Korean high prices and it costs considerably high to raise children.
Currently, serious problems are emerging as children are decreasing, and the number of classes is decreasing every year at school.
>> Currently, serious problems are emerging, as children are decreasing, and the number of classes are decreasing every year at school.
In the future, young people will have to pay a lot of taxes to support the elderly.
>> CORRECT!
But on the other hand, if the population declines, the next generation will live in a better environment.
>> CORRECT!
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