Hi!, Ally.
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Think of culture from another country that you would like Korea to adapt to. Why did you choose that in particular?
There are foreign cultures in various fields that Koreans wanted to adapt.
We have accepted many foreign cultures in clothing, food, and housing.
In short, I think it is because of convenience to accept foreign culture.
Clothing and housing are easy to live, food is easy to cook and rich in nutrients.
However, Korean culture is being moved to foreign countries, and it is because Korean culture is beneficial to them.
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Hi, Son! ^^
We have accepted many foreign cultures in clothing, food, and housing.
In short, I think it is because of convenience to accept foreign culture.
Clothing and housing are easy to live, food is easy to cook and rich in nutrients.
However, Korean culture is being moved to foreign countries, and it is because Korean culture is beneficial to them.
Good job!
That\'s true.
Korean culture is being widely spread nowadays, and I think it\'s wonderful. ^^
~t. Ally
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There are foreign cultures in various fields that Koreans wanted to adapt.
>> CORRECT!
We have accepted many foreign cultures in clothing, food, and housing.
>> CORRECT!
In short, I think it is because of convenience to accept foreign culture.
>> In short, I think it is because of the convenience to accept a foreign culture.
Clothing and housing are easy to live, food is easy to cook and rich in nutrients.
>> It\'s easy to live our life because of clothing and housing, food is rich in nutrients and is easy to cook.
However, Korean culture is being moved to foreign countries, and it is because Korean culture is beneficial to them.
>> CORRECT!
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