Hi! Ally.
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Why do you think is plastic surgery very popular nowadays? Do you think people should avail of this service? Why or why not?
Plastic surgery is especially popular in Korea and has excellent technology.
In the past, plastic surgery was mainly done by women, but now men are also doing a lot of plastic surgery.
I\'m in favor of plastic surgery because it makes people feel confident, makes people young and pretty, and makes people feel good.
Plastic surgery can cost a lot of money and cause side effects, so be careful and I would recommend it to someone who needs it.
It is a good thing for everyone to live in the world with more confidence through plastic surgery.
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Hi, sir Son. ^^
In the past, plastic surgery was mainly done by women, but now men are also doing a lot of plastic surgery.
I\'m in favor of plastic surgery because it makes people feel confident, makes people young and pretty, and makes people feel good.
Plastic surgery can cost a lot of money and cause side effects, so be careful and I would recommend it to someone who needs it.
It is a good thing for everyone to live in the world with more confidence through plastic surgery.
Thank you very much for sending this in.
Me too! ^^
I think people should have the freedom to choose what they want to do to make them happy and confident.
As long as they are not hurting anyone, then they should do as they please, right? ^^
~t. Ally
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Plastic surgery is especially popular in Korea and has excellent technology.
>> Plastic surgery is especially popular in Korea, and they have also perfected the technology.
In the past, plastic surgery was mainly done by women, but now men are also doing a lot of plastic surgery.
>> CORRECT!
I\'m in favor of plastic surgery because it makes people feel confident, makes people young and pretty, and makes people feel good.
>> CORRECT!
Plastic surgery can cost a lot of money and cause side effects, so be careful and I would recommend it to someone who needs it.
>> Plastic surgery can cost a lot of money and cause side effects, so being careful is a must; I would recommend it to someone who needs it.
It is a good thing for everyone to live in the world with more confidence through plastic surgery.
>> CORRECT!
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