Hi! Ally.
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your opinion about having tattoos? If you had the chance, would you get a tattoo? Why or why not?
In the old days, tattooing was taboo and recognized as a bad person in Korea.
But now, tattoos are also accepted as a personality, so young people tattoo a lot.
Tattoos are better to see beautiful scenery, flowers, or symbols than scary pictures.
I would like to try it if I was young, but I don’t have the courage.
I do not approve or oppose tattooing because it is a hobby of an individual, I think it should not disgust others.
강사 첨삭
Hi, sir Son. ^^
But now, tattoos are also accepted as a personality, so young people tattoo a lot.
Tattoos are better to see beautiful scenery, flowers, or symbols than scary pictures.
I would like to try it if I was young, but I don’t have the courage.
I do not approve or oppose tattooing because it is a hobby of an individual, I think it should not disgust others.
I like your perception about the tattoo culture.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. ^^
~t. Ally
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In the old days, tattooing was taboo and recognized as a bad person in Korea.
>> In the old days, tattooing was a taboo and people who had tattoos are recognized as bad persons in Korea.
But now, tattoos are also accepted as a personality, so young people tattoo a lot.
>> But now, tattoos are also accepted as a personality, so young people get tattoos a lot.
Tattoos are better to see beautiful scenery, flowers, or symbols than scary pictures.
>> Tattoos are better seen when they are beautiful sceneries, flowers, or symbols, rather than scary images.
I would like to try it if I was young, but I don’t have the courage.
>> CORRECT!
I do not approve or oppose tattooing because it is a hobby of an individual, I think it should not disgust others.
>> CORRECT!
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